Saturday, 25 May 2013


Homework Narratives:

One day Red the panda was out on his daily walk amongst the trees.  Willow, the green tree-frog greeted him with a friendly smile.  “Hello Red.  Having a lovely walk?” she asked. 
“Yes thanks.  You look very cheerful today,” Red said.
“It’s a beautiful day and it’s my birthday!” screamed Willow.
"Of course” Red said.  “Bye, bye now.  I’ve got an important job to do.  Love to stay and chat, but I have got to go!”
Off he walked through the thick jungle.  “I have to get Willow a present.  She is such a good friend,” Red thought.  After Red walked and walked he finally found a jungle shop.  “Hi, I’m looking for a jar of flies please,” Red said politely.
“I’m sorry.  We sold out yesterday,” the shopkeeper said. 
So off Red set and a couple of metres down he found a shop called ‘The Corner Shop’.  “I would like a jar of flies please,” Red asked.
“Here you are sir.  Thanks for shopping at ‘The Corner Shop’,” the shopkeeper said.
Red scampered on and on until he reached Willow’s little tree house.  “Hello” Red said as he knocked on the door.
“Come in Red,” Willow said.
“Hi Willow.  Happy Birthday!” Red shouted.
“Thank you Red.  You’re so kind,” she said.
“Oh shucks,” Red said.
They had a nice party for the rest of the afternoon.
By Zoe
 
 
The Kiwi
One stormy, cold night Kevin the Kiwi was walking through the bush.  Then all of a sudden “ping” as a possum trap went off.  Kevin the Kiwi was stuck.  The next day the owner of the trap came to check.  Right away Sam unset it and took it to the SPCA.  And since that day you weren’t allowed using possum traps on the ground.
By Sam M.
 
 
One day I was walking on the beach and suddenly I heard a noise.  I saw a splash.  It was a dolphin.  I dove under to get a closer look.  It was a silver colour and very smooth.  It took me for a ride.  I held onto the dolphin’s fin and away we went, salt water everywhere, and splashing.  It gave me a fright but I was amazed.  We did a front flip.  We swam around the ocean a bit more and then it was time to go home.  The dolphin took me back to the beach and there the dolphin gave me a pink charm to wear around my neck.
By Jordan
The Hector’s Dolphin
Once upon a time there was a Hector’s Dolphin called Zoe.  Zoe was a famous dolphin!  She loved doing somersaults in the air.  But one day Zoe head a noise she had never heard before.  What was it she wondered?  “Squeak, squeak”  Zoe said to herself as a gigantic boat went past.  There was something orange and big coming off the back of the boat.  It was a net.  “Help” squeaked Zoe.  But it was too late, the net had scooped her up!  Zoe was getting worried.  Then suddenly she heard a familiar sound.  It was Molly and Sunshine.  “Yay” squeaked Zoe.  They have come to save me.  They stopped the boat and got Zoe out.
By Emma
Once there was a tiger named Fang who was in a contest.  It was called ‘jump the pit’.  His friend (called Bounce) had won it six times.  So they both got to work on jumping small pits and jumping big pits.  They fell in small pits and big pits and jumped the rest. 
Then it came to the day of the finals and they were both still in.  Bounce lined up in 5th place and Fang lined up in 6th place.  Bounce went first and nearly made it, but he just slipped in.  By then Fang was getting very nervous.  Up next was Fang, so he jumps and landed it but broke his ankle.  He went to the hospital the next day and replaced it with a metal ankle and it was as good as new…!?
By Oliver L.
 

Red Panda came to New Zealand to look at the nature.  It was night in the Kaharoa Kokako Trust and Kokako flew over Red Panda.  Red Panda climbed a tree and said “you look yummy”.  Kokako squawked and then shouted “you can’t eat me, I’m endangered like you”.
But Red Panda didn’t care, he grabbed Kokako!  Kokako had to think quickly, so he said “don’t eat me, I’m highly poisonous!”  Red Panda ran away and never came back to New Zealand.
By Ashton

The White-Tailed Deer
Long ago the white-tailed deer was an enemy to monkey!
There were battles about who should rule and who shouldn’t.  Unfortunately for monkeys the white-tailed deer were much bigger than them.
One morning a funny sound woke up the monkeys, then suddenly an ambush attack!  The monkeys were terrified and had not planned anything to help them get away or fight with.
The monkeys fled, but the white-tailed deer chased them and scratched them with their horns.  One by one the monkeys got killed!!! ….             Except one that had hidden in a bush.  The white-tailed deer left and took over everything the monkeys had owned.
As the years went by time progressed, so did the little monkey that had hidden in a bush … that monkey over time had turned into a human.  The monkey who was now a person was making plans of his own.  He had been making all the weapons we have today.                                
REVENGE!!!
This monkey who was now a person had killed all the white-tailed deer he could find, but he didn’t find all of them.
That’s why today they’re ENDANGERED.
By Daniel
 
Shark Attack
There is was.  It struck.  I dodged.  I was being attacked by a shark because I had been caught by a rip.  It struck again and knocked me with its tail.  I was in pain.  Just when it was about to eat me something swam out and started attacking the shark.  It was a dolphin!!!
The shark swam away.  I grabbed the dolphin’s fin and it pulled me back to shore.  My parents were there and I quickly got taken home.  When I recovered I looked on the internet and guess what?  Sharks and dolphins are endangered!
By Ellie
The Hunter
One day Koala and his friend Bat were walking through the forest, chatting about ways to annoy Bat’s brother Steve.  “Throw a gas bomb in his cave!” suggested Koala. 
“No!  BLOW UP his cave!” added Bat. 
“Perfect!  Wait!  Do you hear that?” whispered Koala. 
“Yup!  Shhh!  Its hunters!” said Bat in a frightened way.  “I’m not worried about me…Koala?  Koala!” said Bad angrily. 
“Yeah, I’ll just go and get a beer at the Koala Bar, blah, bye!” Koala murmured.
“KOALA!” screamed Bat as the hunters took Koala into their truck.  “I’ll save…OW!” yelled Bat as he hit a tree.  Suddenly Bat had a plan.  He ran back to his cave and got his homemade gas bomb.  “This’ll do the trick” he thought to himself.  He flew back to the truck’s old location.  “That way!” said Bat pointing west.  He followed the trail until he reached… “Steve’s cave?  YES!  I can stink out his cave too!” danced Bat.  There.  Bat swooped down and dropped the gas bomb on the hunters.
“AHHHHHHHHHH!” the hunters yelled together as the bomb spewed out tons of gas.
“BAT!  Down here!” a familiar voice yelled in distress.
“Koala!  Hang on!”
"Weeeeeeeee!” yelled Koala as Bat lifted him right out of the cave.  “Thanks for saving my life!” thanked Koala.
“No prob!” replied Bat.  “Just don’t get lost again, right?”
“Right!” replied Koala.  “I will not” whispered Koala.  “Not!  He he he!”
By Alex
 






1 comment:

  1. Awesome story Ash. Short, simple and a funny ending! Dad

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