Thursday, 16 May 2013


A narrative by Oliver B.
     THOMAS TANKBEARD

A very long time ago in the Atlantic ocean…

PIGGY ON THE PORT!!! Captain Barney looked through his scope.

“Thomas Tank beard, the most vicious pirate in the sea.”

Captain Barney was the obvious choice he had a full cargo ship of gold and silver.

“Teletubbies take your positions!” Ordered Captain Barney.

The teletubbies took their positions at the cannons.

“Load, and fire!”

The side of the ship spewed out truckloads of bullets.

“Re-load.” Ordered captain Barney.

Then all of a sudden the enemy ship began to spew out large explody cannon balls.

Captain Barney looked though his scope again, there he was Thomas Tank Beard standing next to the wheel of his ship.

Under his breath he mumbled. “laters lumber face.”

“Fire!”

Another round of explody balls poured out of captain Barneys ship.

“Hit!” Yelled one of barneys crew. “Fire!” Repeated captain Barney.

Then all of a sudden out of the blue Thomas Tank Beards ship burst into flames.  Barney gazed as Thomas Tank Beard and his ship sank to the bottom.  Barney had won.

By Oliver B

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