THE PIRATE ATTACK!
The
pirate captain was the most fearsome pirate (not) to ever rule the sea.
“I
have some bad news boys!” yelled Pirate captain. “ARR!” replied his faithful
crew. “I can’t continue to captain this ship,” explained Pirate captain. The
crew started asking; “NO! Who will captain this ship after you?” ”UNLESS,”
added Pirate captain, “I can earn 10,000 million gold galleons!” explained
Pirate captain. “So, who’s ready to do some looting?” asked Pirate captain.
“Arr!” yelled the crew.
“So,
let’s find Red Racky’s ship!” demanded Pirate captain. “Done! He’s
just outside our ship!” said the pirate with chicken pox. Indeed he was!
Red Racky’s huge posh galleon was parked just beside Pirate captain’s
ship (a good old piece of junk in Red Racky’s opinion.) “Load and fire, boys!” Pirate captain & Red Racky yelled
together. “FIRE!” yelled the captains at
the same time. BANG! BANG! BANG! CRASH!
CRASH! BOOM! Truckloads of bullets & cannonballs shot from the ship. Red Racky had sunk! “Yay!” yelled the pirate
captain’s crew. Gold & silver was
raining everywhere! They had got their proffit!
By
Alex
I like your use of speech marks and other punctuation to bring your story to life Alex. The pirates come across as a bunch of scallywags.
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